The Keep talk:Gotta Catch Them All

Recommendations for Overview

"Our party is a tight-knit community of core players.  Together, we have enjoyed companionship, epic victories against bosses, and a steady stream of adorable pet raccoon pictures.  Yet, something is still missing. We think it might be you. Subscribers and people with gems willing to contribute pet quests are always welcome.

This sounds selfish as phrased but I don't want to edit outright without input. Consider in a separate line or  terms like 'always seeking' "Active players"  "Contributors"  "pet quest scrolls"

After removing inactive players, we have quite a bit of space,  We'd love for you apply for our guild. We are looking fo r subscribers and mature players. We offer a place to call home with a strong core we want to build on. We are here for the long haul."

This needs better definition.



Daringheart (talk) 20:55, December 17, 2017 (UTC)