Thread:Gibitul/@comment-28998186-20160717154132/@comment-25369681-20160719101102

Ahem... just for clarification... I assume the text is pure roleplaying? The way it's written, it might easily be mistaken for your real life story. Then again, that's no crime, and interested readers can as well google the place names and find that they either don't exist or are nowhere near the Black Sea. I'm just warning you in case you want to avoid one or two well-meaning people offering you comforts about being an orphan, or wanting to hear your music. (Though maybe you also make music in real life?) Maybe build in some fantasy elements? (Trying to come up with a musical instrument that can't exist in real life now...)

Wishing you good sailing!

Captain Mara (not a pirate in real life... usually ;P )