The Keep talk:The Moon Battle Questline

Is this quest too dark for HabitRPG?
I wrote this questline before I did any quests on HabitRPG, so it's written like a quest for a serious RPG: Lots of doom and gloom and impending apocalypses, not acknowledging the existance of the real world. But most of the  quests I've looked at since are pretty lighthearted, referring to things like red dailies more than truly evil and destructive villains. Should I change things to make them fit the overall tone of HabitRPG more?

Ajehy (talk) 17:41, June 22, 2014 (UTC)